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11,42—3
parcourant toute la courbe: 'running the whole course
1
. A brilliant example
of modified metaphor. The dead metaphor 'course
1
is revived by 'running
1
.
1.47
rejetes dans Vombre:
L
totallv eclipsed'. A standard metaphor rendered more
powerfully by another.
1.48
se con&tituaienr. 'are emerging from the shadows
1
.
The metaphor is
brilliantly restored.
Cultural metaphor
11.3-4
terra incognita: 'uncharted territory". The Latin
tag would seem contrived in
the English text. The rendering is excellent.
Omissions and additions
11.11-12
I! n'est pas moms vrai: *but\ 'Nevertheless
1
or The fact remains that
1
?
1.14
ce retard: 'this
1
. Difficult! Possibly'these omissions
1
.
IM9-20
a dtverses epaques: Omitted as unnecessary.
1.26
abstracts: Since
systematiques has been changed to 'systematized
1
, there is
no place for 'abstract', which is perhaps a pity.
1.31
a Vepoque contemporaine: Barely covered by 'that constitute'. 'Now
1
or
'today
1
could be put after 'society' (1,29).
1.36
leurs rapports: 'their relationships with each other'
(case-grammar
applied),
Change of tenses
11.48-9
se constituaient . , .
exigeaient: On balance, the
change from imperfect to
continuous present is justified.
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