TASK 2
Subscale
Mark
Commentary
Content
4
All content the candidate answered is relevant to the
task. The candidate has responded to each information
of Cris’s letter: thought about the news (‘
good new’),
the grandmother (‘
good’). The candidate have given
some devices: ‘
buy a camera’, ‘
go on holidays’, ‘visit
me’, ‘save money’. The candidate also emphasized the
advice ‘
buy camera’: ‘
good idea’, ‘make fotos’.
At the end of the letter, after giving advices, the
candidate emphasize the right to make decisions is for
the reader, ‘Cris’, ‘tell me your decide what you do’.
However, the candidate has missed the information of
the parents’s advice. In stead of writing what she think
about it, the candiadte give Cris the same advice to the
parents’ (‘
save money’), and ask Cris
‘What your
parents think’.
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